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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The pizza charts above depict the nutritional features of two popular dishes: medium baked
potato
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 and
macaroni
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. It
is shown
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 the percentage of
carbohydrates
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,
protein
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, glucose, saturated fat and other
nutrients
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 in each one.
Overall
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,
carbohydrates
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is
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 in the first place in both dinners,
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however
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however,
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 the second position in baked
potato
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 belongs to
protein
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,
while
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 in
macaroni
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 the second position belongs to saturated fat. Analysing the composition in the baked
potato
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 dinner, it is possible to see that
carbohydrates
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 are 35%,
protein
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 25%, glucose 15%, saturated fat 10% and other
nutrients
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 15% of the total
nutrients
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.
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, in pasta dinner, more than half of the nutritional consistency
are
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carbohydrates
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 (52%).
Protein
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 and glucose have the same amount (11%),
whereas
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 saturated fat is responsible for 21%, and other
nutrients
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 only 5%. In conclusion,
the
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 plate of baked
potato
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 is healthier than a plate of
macaroni
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 because in the first dish
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,
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there
are
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is
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 more
protein
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 and less
carbohydrates
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 and saturated fat than in
macaroni
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, macaroni, carbohydrates, protein, nutrients with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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