The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

You should write at least 150 words.
The pizza charts above depict the nutritional features of two popular dishes: medium baked
potato
and
macaroni
. It
is shown
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the percentage of
carbohydrates
,
protein
, glucose, saturated fat and other
nutrients
in each one.
Overall
,
carbohydrates
is
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are
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in the first place in both dinners,
however
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however,
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the second position in baked
potato
belongs to
protein
,
while
in
macaroni
the second position belongs to saturated fat. Analysing the composition in the baked
potato
dinner, it is possible to see that
carbohydrates
are 35%,
protein
25%, glucose 15%, saturated fat 10% and other
nutrients
15% of the total
nutrients
.
On the other hand
, in pasta dinner, more than half of the nutritional consistency
are
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carbohydrates
(52%).
Protein
and glucose have the same amount (11%),
whereas
saturated fat is responsible for 21%, and other
nutrients
only 5%. In conclusion,
the
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plate of baked
potato
is healthier than a plate of
macaroni
because in the first dish
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,
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there
are
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is
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more
protein
and less
carbohydrates
and saturated fat than in
macaroni
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, macaroni, carbohydrates, protein, nutrients with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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