The three pie chart illustrate howmany hours students spend in the library in British university.

The three pie chart illustrate howmany hours students spend in the library in British university.
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The pie charts show the amount of
time
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pupils spent in the
library
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of one British university from three different groups.
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, half of the students dedicated about one to seven
hours
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of their
time
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in the
library
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with most of them being undergraduates and the rest being postgraduates. More than half of postgraduates allocated a lot more
time
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than the undergraduates in the
library
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which was 15
hours
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or above. Looking at the graphs in more detail, only nine
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of undergraduates spent 15
hours
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or more. Twenty-eight percent of them stayed for eight to fourteen
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and the rest spent between one to seven
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.
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, most of the postgraduates were invested in the
library
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for a long
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, with only seventeen
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of them having less than one-third of their day in the
library
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. To summarise, between the bachelor and the master students, there is a contradiction in how they used their
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. Most of the latter dedicated half their day
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the
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while
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the former were doing something else.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, library, hours with synonyms.
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