The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.

The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.
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The given bar chart illustrates the weekly expenses of family members in a country separated into eight categories in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, the trend showed that the most spending in 1968 was on food,
while
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the least was
fuel
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on fuel
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energy.
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, in 2018, it can be seen that people spent their money on leisure activities and only limited spending on fuel and personal
goods
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. Starting in 1968, the majority of household members tended to use their weekly perks for buying food and drinks at 35%, followed by housing expenses and entertainment activities in their leisure time were around 10%.
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, the percentage of household, personal
goods
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, and transportation were exactly the same approximately above 5%.
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, the trend has changed over 40 years later, in 2018, when they went out the most to do leisure activities the most spending by almost a quarter.
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, the allocated salary for fuel power and personal
goods
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in a week was slightly below 5%. Interestingly, in both years, the family members purchased a similar number of household
goods
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by under 10%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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