The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given graph depicts the average monthly changes in the price of
nickel
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,
copper
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, and zinc throughout 2014.
Overall
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, all the metal prices experienced a decline during the given period. Zinc, the exceptional, had the opposite trend.
To begin
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with, the changing prices of
nickel
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and
copper
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started at 6% and 1%, respectively. These figures witnessed a notable decline especially, in
nickel
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hitting a low of -3%
while
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copper
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was less than -1% at the beginning of June. After that, the percentage of prices changing for both metals increased and remained stable at -1% for
nickel
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and 1% for
copper
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until September
then
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again both soured and reached the peak of 1% and just under 2%, respectively. Regarding the zinc price, the ratio of the change was 1% in January
then
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gradually went down over the next six months at -1% with slight elevation and stability for three months before increasing and reaching 2%
at the end
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of the given period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, copper with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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