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The qualities and skills that people require to be successful in today’s world cannot be learned at university or at other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the eminences and skills are required and it is cannot be learned at
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. I totally agree because the workplace is more practical and schools mostly teach
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.
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 problem.
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, the real workplace is more practical in
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 of procedure.
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, the
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 only taught the
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 and lack of practicals.
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, the
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 think it is very superficial.
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, the
students
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 went to the laboratorium twice
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a year in
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 of examination. It is a very common situation and it happens mostly all around the city.
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, practice is important to raise the skill and ability.
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, the
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 teach the irrelevant
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.
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, the
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 at
school
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 gives an example of the problem.
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,
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theory
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 will never have the same result as
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real life. The internship will be more practical than
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. The
students
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 will be more skilful if they get real work.
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, an internship costs an arm and leg in
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 of transportation.
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, a student will face a different form of administrative letter at a certain office and it is a different form of letter in
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 of structure and content.
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, the
students
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 will ask their mentor at the office based on the real situation. In conclusion, today being practical and problem solving based on the real situation at the workplace is good to raise the skills of the
students
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 in today's world.
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, forcing the
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 to have real experience is better for their future careers.

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introduction/conclusion
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structure
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examples
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • emotional intelligence
  • self-awareness
  • interpersonal skills
  • adaptability
  • resilience
  • networking
  • negotiation
  • time management
  • practical skills
  • real-world experience
  • academic knowledge
  • career advancement
  • foundational understanding
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