New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The new technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers since the

last

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that’s only the beginning. I

am agree

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that

make

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the life of everyone easier but disagree

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the huge consequences that

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to

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the

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climate

. I’ll explain myself.

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, since the year 2000 , the delivery changed our life to all of us. From Amazon,

Ebay

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, to Uber

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the news technologies for buying and selling exploded. 100 years ago you could not imagine that because our

grand parents

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grandparents

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used to go to the shop

everyday

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, walking, riding

bicycle

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or even horse, but never they would pay someone to go do their own groceries. Today WE CAN . You don’t want to spend hours after work at the supermarket , just click and collect. It

make

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the

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life so

easier

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good example for me , and I am really happy about it, I live in Australia and not every Christmas I can be with my family ,

not

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every birthday I can share a cake with them, so I am really glad to just click online and buy flowers or dress at the

last

minute for my family.

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a good thing for the environment. We are trying to save our planet but more and more

industry

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industries

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are building

for

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make everything cheaper and cheaper.And that

start

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with China. How come everything can be made from China even if the main product doesn’t come from there

.

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I’ll explain you. I worked for 6 months in a

cotton

farm, from seeding to picking the

cotton

. Guess what are they doing with the tonnes of

cotton

they harvested all year? Send it

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China, and

then

buy

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clothes from them…

instead

of just

make

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their own one. In conclusion, I suppose the new technologies won’t change and will keep

going to be developed

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but I would like to make everyone understand that buying online and not in a local shop

are

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most

a

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the time

negatif

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negative

for the

climat

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climate

. Think about what you are buying and if it’s really necessary

to

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you to have it.