the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make cmparisons where relevant.

the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make cmparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate how much washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners use electricity and the amount of consumption, in hours per week, from 1920 to 2019. From an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that housework used more energy as time went by,
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the quantity of time to use it decreased. Regarding the electrical-intensive statistics, what stands out from the scheme was refrigerators had a significant increase in the first 60 years, from about 0% to around 100%, and reached a plateau until 2019.
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the same with vacuum cleaners, with approximately 30% in 1920
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grew up to roughly 100% in 2000 and stayed the same until
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washing machines went through an erratic period, they still managed to rise from nearly 40% to almost doubled in 2019 (more than 70%). It is clearly evident that in 1920, roughly 50 hours per week were used to do
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work and it had a considerable decline until just over 15% by 1980, which remained relatively unchanged until 2000
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before it continued to drop to around 10%.
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