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The chart shows information about the actual and expected figures of populations in three cities, Jakarta, Sao Paulo and Shanghai.

The chart shows information about the actual and expected figures of populations in three cities, Jakarta, Sao Paulo and Shanghai.
The bar chart illustrates the population in three different countries, namely
Jakarta
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,
Sao
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 Paulo and Shanghai in 1990,
as well as
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an
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estimated and actual data in 2007.
Overall
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,
Sao
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 Paulo had the highest number of inhabitants in both years, followed by Shanghai,
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Jakarta
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and Jakarta
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 had the lowest figure . It is
also
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 notable that there was a significant difference between forecasting and actual. As can be seen from the diagram, the quantity of
Sao
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 Paulo’s population in 1990 was approximately 16
million
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 people, double the number of
Jakarta
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 at the same time.
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, forecasts expected that the figure for
Jakarta
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 would increase to 12
million
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,
likewise
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,
Sao
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 Paulo’s inhabitants could rise to well over 20
million
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.
In contrast
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,
Jakarta
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 is believed to have a slight decrease, from 13 to 11
million
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 in the period. With respect to the actual number in 2000, all three countries had a soar.
Sao
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 Paula saw spectacular growth, just under 25
million
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 in 10-period,
while
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Jakarta
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 remained at 13
million
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 in total. In the meantime, Shanghai showed a massive increase, which was 15
million
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instead
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 of a drop like expectation in the next 10 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words jakarta, sao, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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