The pie chart below show the makeup of the congress in country X after Election Day. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

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the proportion of the congress in country X after Election Day. There are 4

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and 1 independent ,

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1 paragraphs

30 words

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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The pie chart below show the makeup of the congress in country X after Election Day. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

Some people believe that research of medicines should be directly based on human trial. Is this the right way give your opinion and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

Some people think it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts, and grandparents) were involved in bringing up children rather than only parents

Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries an increasing number of children are overweigh as a result of eating too much fast food. It is necessary for governments to ban selling this kind of food in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?