The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
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The three maps illustrate the construction of West Park Secondary School from 1950, 1980, and 2010. On the northern
side
, the main road remained intact without experiencing any reconstruction until 2010.
Moreover
, houses were transformed into car parks, science blocks, and the school's main building in 1980. Those three areas still existed until the year 2010, yet the cark park had been expanded until it reached the southern
side
.
In contrast
, on the southern
side
, the playground was the only one which remained intact.
Nonetheless
, the playground had experienced reconstruction to be smaller in size by 2010.
Next,
on
this
side
, the farthest left was the area with the most changes in the past 60 years. Started with farmland to the sports field and
then
became a mixture of a car park and sports field by the year 2010.
Overall
, the housing areas and farmland have been fully taken out and never be seen in 1980 and after.
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