The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The bar chart provides statistical reports on the expenditure of consumer goods being spent by France and the
UK
in 2010. Overall
, the largest spending in both countries is on cars, then
followed by computers. Perfume has minimum spending on the total expenditures for both countries.
The top spending of
expenditure in the Change preposition
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UK
is cars at $450,000,
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then
followed by books at $400,000. On
the third position, there are cameras at $360,000, Change preposition
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whereas
perfume is being
the lowest spending with total money less than $150,000.
On the other side, in France, the highest expenditure is similar to the Unnecessary verb
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UK
, which is cars at $400,000. Moreover
, computers are in the second position with money being spent at $350,000 which is higher than in the UK
, followed by books with total spending at $300,000. The lowest spending on consumer goods in 2010 was perfume and cameras at $200,000 and $150,000 respectively.Submitted by gestienanovitasari on
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