should countries invest in building transport systems? discuss both views and express an opinion

Many

people

believe that investing in a mobility

system

is important to the development of a

country

. Others

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have the idea that there are much more interesting areas that should

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investments.

This

essay agrees with the prior statement and

this

point of view will be developed in the following lines. Integration between cities creates unity in a

country

, making trade and

people

circulation easier,

As a result

, economics and social development are fostered by a good

system

of

transport

. In Japan,

for instance

, where the transportation infrastructure has high quality, it is feasible

people

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travelling for

a long distances

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without trouble. The highways are in perfect condition and are well-signed.

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it

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, the

transport

of manufactures, commodities and

people

through the nation is safe

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provides the circulation of products and services and increasingly enhances

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the local economy.

On the other hand

,

people

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advocate in favour of investments in other sectors, normally share the

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idea

that there are other areas that demand more investments and attention,

such

as the health sector and education.

Thus

, applying money to the

transport

system

is irrelevant. Some cities and their government head their management with

this

idea and, as an example, I can mention my city. There,

people

count on good health facilities and qualified public education.

However

, the city infrastructure is poor, with roads in bad condition, no public illumination traffic signs and crowded public transportation.

This

way of management is completely the opposite of what I think is a good way to make a

country

prosperous.

In other words

, investing in building

transport

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system

is essential to make a place grow and develop in different aspects.

To conclude

, some think that the growth of a

country

is not connected with its

transport

system

, others, like me, believe that applying money in

this

field is inevitable to create conditions to foster trade and job opportunities.