The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
pie chart illustrates the data about Verb problem
apply
ages
of residents of two countries Correct article usage
the ages
such
as Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that both Yemen
and Italy are more populated with people from 15 to 59 years
old. After 50 years
this
part of population
has increased only in Add an article
the population
Yemen
while
in Italy these indicators fell, however
individuals who are older than 60 Add a comma
however,
years
grew in the percentage in Italy.
Pie
chart shows that in Add an article
The pie
A pie
Yemen
half of the residents were children from 0 to 14 years
old. The second place (46,3%) took society whose age was 15-59 and after 50 years
this
number go
up approximately to one in ten, Wrong verb form
went
hence
, accept
Wrong verb form
accepting
leading
position. Add an article
the leading
a leading
On the contrary
, people from 0 to 14 Replace the word
decreased
decrease
in Wrong verb form
decreased
Correct article usage
apply
the
percentage, but the elderly part of the Correct article usage
apply
population
Replace the word
increased
increase
and Replace the word
increased
reach
5,7%, albeit, in the first period their amount was lower than 5%. Wrong verb form
reached
However
, it must be noted that Italy is the biggest owner of this
type of population
(24,1%) than Yemen
in 2000 and this
indicator grow almost to a fifth in 2050. Humans from 15 to 59 took the first place in the
2000 but started to fall during the period and predicted that it dropped to a little bit lower than a half. Correct article usage
apply
Population
Correct article usage
The population
with
people whose age is 0-14 Change preposition
of
not
change a lot and decreased to approximately higher than 10%.Add a missing verb
did not
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