The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of residents of two countries

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and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050.  

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, it can be seen from the chart that both

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and Italy are more populated with people from 15 to 59

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old. After 50

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part of

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population

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the population

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has increased only in

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in Italy these indicators fell,

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individuals who are older than 60

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grew in the percentage in Italy.  

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chart shows that in

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half of the residents were children from 0 to 14

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old. The second place (46,3%) took society whose age was 15-59 and after 50

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up approximately to one in ten,

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,

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leading

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position.

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, people from 0 to 14

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percentage, but the elderly part of the

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increase

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and

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5,7%, albeit, in the first period their amount was lower than 5%.

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, it must be noted that Italy is the biggest owner of

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type of

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(24,1%) than

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in 2000 and

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indicator grow almost to a fifth in 2050. Humans from 15 to 59 took the first place in

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2000 but started to fall during the period and predicted that it dropped to a little bit lower than a half.

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with

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people whose age is 0-14

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change a lot and decreased to approximately higher than 10%.