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As a part of their education, individuals should spend a period of time living or working in another country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People have to spend some of their time
to live
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 or
work
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 in other countries as part of their education.
This
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the
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light
of
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 the merits and demerits of
this
 educational journey before concluding that the abroad experience is important to
broaden
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 perspective. Regarding
of
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staying or working in other regions for specific
qualification
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qualifications
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, occasionally
this
 way will
also
 help students to gain insightful knowledge and skills. First and foremost,
individual
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individuals
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that
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who
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living
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 abroad will learn
new
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about new
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culture
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cultures
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. The different
culture
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cultures
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 will lead them to not only learn about their course but
also
 help them to learn about new
languange
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language
 or practice.
Furthermore
, studying in different countries can develop
international
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 circle.
Besides
 that,
this
 will give benefits for the person to extend their relationships or even their business to
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.
On the other hand
, leaving their home country might give them several disadvantages.
Firstly
, they will be far from their family and friends.
This
 means that
,
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international
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an international
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student
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students
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 might experience
home sick
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homesick
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.
Moreover
, a different culture, weather, and
custom
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customs
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 can lead to depression
as a result
 of too many new things to adapt
.
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 All in all, even though living abroad seems hard to manage,
but
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the benefits of it defeat its drawbacks. By living in other countries,
student
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students
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 will gain
unique
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 point of view and soft skills to adapt
for
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 new challenges. I would be content with the agreement of having an experience living in other nations.
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