the graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014

the graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014
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The line chart displays the monthly change in price of
Copper
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,
Nickel
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, and Zinc during the year 2014. The unit measurement is in percentage.
To begin
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with,
Nickel
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had its highest cost adjustment in January with up to 6%
while
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the other two have never reached that level.
Next,
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Zinck becomes second with its highest adjustment in the following month.
Copper
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reached its peak in December with approximately slightly below 2% change.
At the end
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of the year,
Nickel
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has the lowest fee adjustment when compared to others just below
Copper
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.
On the other hand
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,
Nickel
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's fee went downhill in June with minus 3%.
However
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, the lowest fall for
Copper
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and Zinc happened twice in different months with less than -1% and -1% respectively.
Overall
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,
Nickel
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's price experienced both the highest and the lowest change in 12 months.
In contrast
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, Zinck started weak in the first month and
then
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finished the strongest in December.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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