The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The
data
illustrates different types of ways which
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in which
people
in one European city selected for going to work or travel in 1960, 1980 and 2000 respectively.
The data
illustrates 4 different transport: Bus, Car
, Bike and Foot
values that people
selected for going to work or travel. Overall
, each year has different frequently used transport. The highest data
was "Car
" in 2000 and the lowest was also
"Car
" and "Bike".
First,
the majority of people
used "Car
" and "Foot
". In 2000, the date of "Car
" rated over 35 and it is more than 5 times of 1980's "Car
" graph. The "Foot
" in 1960 indicates accurately 35 and this
is the highest bar involved in the "Foot
" article.
Next,
there are two bars which had the lowest data
overall
. The "Car
" in 1960 had more than 5 but lower than 10. Moreover
, it recorded the lowest among the three years. As well as
this
value, the 2000's "Bike" had exactly the same graph which is over 5. Lastly
, in 1980, "Bus" appeared the
most popular way that Change preposition
as the
people
were transported which is over 25 and "Foot
" was the lowest transport which was less than 20.Submitted by chwkmkmn on
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