The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
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data
illustrates different types of ways Use synonyms
which
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in which
people
in one European city selected for going to work or travel in 1960, 1980 and 2000 respectively.
The Use synonyms
data
illustrates 4 different transport: Bus, Use synonyms
Car
, Bike and Use synonyms
Foot
values that Use synonyms
people
selected for going to work or travel. Use synonyms
Overall
, each year has different frequently used transport. The highest Linking Words
data
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Car
" in 2000 and the lowest was Use synonyms
also
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Car
" and "Bike".
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First,
the majority of Linking Words
people
used "Use synonyms
Car
" and "Use synonyms
Foot
". In 2000, the date of "Use synonyms
Car
" rated over 35 and it is more than 5 times of 1980's "Use synonyms
Car
" graph. The "Use synonyms
Foot
" in 1960 indicates accurately 35 and Use synonyms
this
is the highest bar involved in the "Linking Words
Foot
" article.
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Next,
there are two bars which had the lowest Linking Words
data
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overall
. The "Linking Words
Car
" in 1960 had more than 5 but lower than 10. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it recorded the lowest among the three years. Linking Words
As well as
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this
value, the 2000's "Bike" had exactly the same graph which is over 5. Linking Words
Lastly
, in 1980, "Bus" appeared Linking Words
the
most popular way that Change preposition
as the
people
were transported which is over 25 and "Use synonyms
Foot
" was the lowest transport which was less than 20.Use synonyms
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