You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: Where have you moved to? What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address?

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Dear Sir/ Madam, Hope you are doing well. I am writing
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my home address.
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tried to contact the bank
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through
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phone, but they
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had
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hung up my phone for around one hour, which was so
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annoying to me. Let me elaborate
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scenario. I have recently moved from Ontario to Nova Scotia, but
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forgot to change the home address for my banking purposes.
As a result
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, all documents are going to the old residence, where other people are living, whom
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don't know. I tried changing it online, but the server was down for more than one week.
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, to overcome
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called the bank itself, but
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of doing the actual work, they didn't even
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me a proper answer and no
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steps were taken
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the Organisation. It would be great if you resolve
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documents went to the older location, where
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don't have any access.
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would be grateful if you
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send me
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of those documents. It would be very
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helpful if you help me with
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. Thanks for your consideration. Yours Sincerely Jay Chawla
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single idea and sticks to that idea throughout.
coherence cohesion
Organize paragraphs logically, making clear connections between them for better flow.
task achievement
Use a consistent and appropriate level of formality throughout your letter to match the context of communicating with a bank.
task achievement
Respond fully to all points of the task, including addressing what action you expect regarding the misaddressed communication.
coherence cohesion
Open and close your letter with more standard phrases suitable for formal letters to maintain a professional tone and style.
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