There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last times you complained explain what you want the manager to do.
Dear Mr,
I am writing
this
letter by
some reasons. As you know I have been visiting your Change preposition
for
sport
complex for Change the noun form
sports
the
five years richest located in the south-west Correct article usage
apply
in
the city on Change preposition
of
the
Bristol Correct article usage
apply
road
between the tools shop. I would like to complain about your Capitalize word
Road
center
Change the spelling
centre
,
because there Remove the comma
apply
appear
some problem with the changing room wall Change the verb form
appears
in
the second floor. The wall Change preposition
on
become
to crack. About all I was informed about Verb problem
began
this
complex, that it was constructed by builders 20 years ago. Until now, it did not repair.
Consequently
, this
is alarming me
not only for meCorrect pronoun usage
apply
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
for the other visitors. Probably two days ago when was
Correct pronoun usage
there was
the
strong storm, Correct article usage
a
in
the second floor of the complex, heavy rainfall flowed through the wall after Change preposition
on
then
appear cracks. I would like to tell you solve
these issues. Some visitors Add the particle
to solve
ready
Add a missing verb
are ready
for
the invest in your sports center. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, we are able to advertise your complex.
Thank you a huge, all the best
Your
faithfully
John Mark.Correct the word
Yours
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logical structure
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Address the manager formally and introduce the purpose of your letter in the introduction. In the body, clearly describe the problem, past complaints, and what actions you would like to be taken in separate paragraphs. Conclude your letter by summarizing your concerns and expressing hope for resolution.
greeting and closing
Use proper greetings and sign-offs in a formal letter. Instead of 'Dear Mr,', use 'Dear Mr. [Last Name],' or 'Dear Manager,' if the last name is unknown. Sign off with 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your full name.
single idea per paragraph
Limit each paragraph to a single idea. The first paragraph should introduce the problem, the second should discuss previous complaints, and the third should outline your expectations for resolution. This structure helps the reader follow your argument more easily.
complete response
Provide a complete and direct response to each of the task prompts. Describe the changing room problem and its consequences, recount your previous complaints and their outcomes, and explicitly state what actions you expect from the manager. Avoid unnecessary details that do not support your main points.
suitable writing tone
Use a tone that is suitable for a formal complaint. Be respectful but assertive. State the facts clearly and avoid colloquial language or overly casual expressions. Make sure your language reflects the seriousness of your concerns without being aggressive.