the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university

the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university
The given diagrams provide information about the planned changes Of Biology School of ABC University.
Overall
, more facilities will be built in the area in future,
while
the total size of
area
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the area
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will not change a lot. First of all, the driving road will not be revamped, despite that there will be a new car park for
staffs
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built beside the Teaching building where the bushes presently are. The teaching building will be expanded by
spliting
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splitting
into two towers, just like the lecture room. The drama centre will be turned into a music centre to serve a different purpose. Apart from the expansion of the IT centre, a lab and an office building will be established outside the indoor sports hall by removing a large part of
bushes
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there.
However
, the central library, cafe and indoor sports hall will remain unchanged in future.
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