The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams provide information concerning the transformation of cutting equipment between 1.4 and 0.8 million years ago.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that both tools A and B
were based on a triangle shape but their size was noticeably developed over the time period.
To begin
the appearance of tool
A was about 10 centimetres
in height, 5 centimetres
in width and 2.5 centimetres
in thickness. the material of tool
A was slightly darker than tool
Capitalize word
Tool
B
. In terms of their characteristic, apparatus B
has more shine than apparatus
A.
Moving on to the external looks of Capitalize word
Apparatus
Tool
B
, there was dramatically increased
in terms of width, and it reached around 8 Replace the word
a dramatic increase
centimetres
. The measurement of height and thickness remained almost the same level especially
in the former. The latter was significantly thinner than Add the comma(s)
, especially
tool
A. In terms of material, equipment B
was made by substance with more brighter shade than equipment A.Submitted by nine318 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, tool, centimetres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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