The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams provide information concerning the transformation of cutting equipment between 1.4 and 0.8 million years ago.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that both tools A and Linking Words
B
were based on a triangle shape but their size was noticeably developed over the time period.
Use synonyms
To begin
the appearance of Linking Words
tool
A was about 10 Use synonyms
centimetres
in height, 5 Use synonyms
centimetres
in width and 2.5 Use synonyms
centimetres
in thickness. the material of Use synonyms
tool
A was slightly darker than Use synonyms
Use synonyms
tool
Capitalize word
Tool
B
. In terms of their characteristic, apparatus Use synonyms
B
has more shine than Use synonyms
apparatus
A.
Moving on to the external looks of Capitalize word
Apparatus
Tool
Use synonyms
B
, there was Use synonyms
dramatically increased
in terms of width, and it reached around 8 Replace the word
a dramatic increase
centimetres
. The measurement of height and thickness remained almost the same level Use synonyms
especially
in the former. The latter was significantly thinner than Add the comma(s)
, especially
tool
A. In terms of material, equipment Use synonyms
B
was made by substance with more brighter shade than equipment A.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, tool, centimetres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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