The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart denotes the manifold categories about the
value
of exports in one country throughtout
2015 and 2016, and the table Correct your spelling
throughout
ilustrates
the change of Correct your spelling
illustrates
percentage
in in each exports's
category in 2016 compared with 2015.
Change noun form
exports
Overall
, it was clear that the most exported in 2015 and 2016 was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
petroleum
products
. In addition
, only gems and jewellery experienced a slump of
Change preposition
in
percentage
.
Petroleum
products
has become
the highest Wrong verb form
have
value
in 2015 as well as
2016 with the value
of export earnings around $60 billions
. Change to singular
billion
Whereas
,
the Remove the comma
apply
value
of other products
namely engineered, gems and jewellery, agriculture, and textile
was Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
more little
than Correct word choice
less
petroleum
, and the most little exporting earnings was
textiles in 2015 with $25 Change the verb form
were
billions
.
Gems and jewellery become the only Change to singular
billion
one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
that
Correct determiner usage
whose
percentage
change in values degenerated with the
Correct article usage
a
percentage
of 5.18%. While
, textiles experienced the highest rise that
was 15.24%, and the lowest increase was Correct pronoun usage
which
petroleum
products
with 3 per cent.Submitted by fifi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, percentage, petroleum, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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