The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart denotes the manifold categories about the
value
of exports in one country
throughtout
Correct your spelling
throughout
2015 and 2016, and the table
ilustrates
Correct your spelling
illustrates
the change of
percentage
in in each
exports's
Change noun form
exports
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category in 2016 compared with 2015.
Overall
, it was clear that the most exported in 2015 and 2016
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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petroleum
products
.
In addition
, only gems and jewellery experienced a slump
of
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in
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percentage
.
Petroleum
products
has become
Wrong verb form
have
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the highest
value
in 2015
as well as
2016 with the
value
of export earnings around $60
billions
Change to singular
billion
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.
Whereas
,
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apply
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the
value
of other
products
namely engineered, gems and jewellery, agriculture, and
textile
Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
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was
more little
Correct word choice
less
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than
petroleum
, and the most little exporting earnings
was
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were
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textiles in 2015 with $25
billions
Change to singular
billion
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. Gems and jewellery become the only
one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
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that
Correct determiner usage
whose
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percentage
change in values degenerated with
the
Correct article usage
a
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percentage
of 5.18%.
While
, textiles experienced the highest rise
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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was 15.24%, and the lowest increase was
petroleum
products
with 3 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, percentage, petroleum, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports
  • Categories
  • Percentage change
  • Trend
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fluctuations
  • Overall performance
  • Sector
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Trade figures
  • Economic indicator
  • Market dynamics
  • Infographics interpretation
  • Statistical representation
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