the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.

the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
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The maps illustrate the evolution of a bookshop from 2000 to today. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the store is rearranged and made more comfortable with some new reading facilities.
According to
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the floorplans, the entrance door is not changed. In front of the entry gate, the travel and new books zones stay the same,
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the service desk which is placed southwest of it. On the north side of the bookstore, there was a section of fiction books but at the moment it is comparted and converted to art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction area. Looking at the northeast of the room, the fiction section is replaced with non-fiction books. Another interesting point is that the old art, hobbies, and cookery segment are renovated to a reading area, equipped with chairs and tables. To the south of it, the non-fiction place is made into a new cafe, where people can enjoy food
while
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reading.
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  • depicts
  • changes
  • occurred
  • transformations
  • developments
  • span
  • visual
  • comparison
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