Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is often considered that in the contemporary world,
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museums
and
art
galleries
are focusing on the workers rather than showing the cultures or creative works from different nations.
Thus
, I assent from the notion which
further
leads to a logical conclusion. Commencing, there are various factors which support that the
individual
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who are working in the
museums
and
galleries
are mainly focused on the workers and how to gain money.
However
, there are
number
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of visiters are come and see all the beauty of the
art
and
museums
but the workers are not interested in
explaing
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explaining
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the customs rather they are willing to take capital only.
For example
, in Delhi, there is a traditional museum which is not maintained by the folks who are working there
instead
, they keep an eye on cash. Probing ahead,
art
galleries
have knowledge about various
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of things from overseas which is placed in the gallery but not
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supervise
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by the
concern
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person.
Moreover
, the prices are high for
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each guy and
every one
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can not
efford
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afford
this
much amount.
For instance
, I was
taken
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a tour
in
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Udaipur
last
year, there
are
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a number of
art works
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artworks
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from
abraod
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abroad
and I found that there
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no fellow present over
their
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to explain the theme and I
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perplexed
of
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that
art
as it
is
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complicated. In a nutshell,
government
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should take
actions
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against the works in the
museums
and
art
galleries
so,
humankind
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that humankind
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will get the essential information.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • local culture
  • traditions
  • tourists
  • economic impact
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • educational experience
  • art movements
  • historical events
  • balance
  • feasible
  • sustainable
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