The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
The diagram illustrates the data about the salary development of secondary
teachers’
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and the duration in five countries in 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that Luxembourg had by far the highest rate, and the longest time to reach the maximum number was Korea. Luxembourg came in first in terms of number,
although
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30
years
to gain $59 thousand, and 15
years
after the starting point, it reached $112 thousand. Teachers’ wages in Korea and Japan show a similar number at
first,
and it took around 35
years
for them to experience a significant rise. Meanwhile, the fee improvements in Australia and Denmark were considerably lower than in other countries,at under $10 thousand.
However
, the level of educators’ payroll in Denmark
not
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only higher than Australia but
also
has the shortest term compared with other states. When it comes to the term, they need approximately 10
years
to arrive at their maximum numbers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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