You have had a problem with your nest-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour in your letter * Explain the problem * Suggest a solution * Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction because

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have not been able to speak to you about loud noises that cause

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discomfort. I have been living here for five years and always

at the end

of the week,

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prefer

rest

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to rest

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off because

every

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normal

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get tired and want to rest

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the weekends.

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, there

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no peace in my life since you moved into

this

apartment.

For

this

reason, during the day I become

exhaust

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and irritable. It will be

cause

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a cause

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major problems in my health and career in

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nearest

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near

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future.

Also

this

complaint is not only from me, but our

neighbors

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are

also

angry about

this

situation. You should pay attention to

this

complaint. I am afraid that will not become

argument

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why, I have a suggestion. you should move to the yard. I

sure

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, it would be good for everyone. I look forward to your reply and resolution to our problem. Your

sinceraly

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sincerely

Jurabek

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and purpose. The body paragraphs should each address a specific aspect of the task, such as explaining the problem, suggesting a solution, and stating the actions you will take.

Coherence & Cohesion

Work on developing a logical structure that guides the reader through the letter. Use connective words and phrases to link sentences and paragraphs together more clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure the greeting and sign-off are consistent with the formal tone required for this task. Using 'Dear Sir or Madam' is appropriate, and signing off with 'Yours sincerely' is correct, but make sure to capitalize 'Sincerely'.

Task Achievement

Fully and directly answer all parts of the task, ensuring that the problem is clearly explained, a viable solution is proposed, and the consequences of inaction are outlined. While the letter includes these elements, they can be expanded upon for clarity and emphasis.

Task Achievement

Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid any language that may come across as confrontational or overly casual for this situation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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6Linking words
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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

166 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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