Teenagers should not be allowed to use mobile phones in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

school

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the school

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prohibited

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their children

to bring

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mobile

phones

to class. I totally agree with

this

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rules where children need to focus more on the learning process without the distraction of the device. The utilization of mobile

phones

are

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efficient

depends

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on the activities. People

uses

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the phone

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phone

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phones

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for surfing

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to surf

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through

internet

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the internet

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, help them with their

assignment

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assignments

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, and

updating

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the issues that are happening around the world.

However

, it is not really

appropiate

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appropriate

to bring

phones

to school.

Firstly

, some schools apply

paper based

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teaching. That

kind

of process

support

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children to be more active in class naturally by doing discussion face to face,

team work

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and

improve

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analytical thinking skills. Imagine if they bring the

phone

, they would not put their effort to much to the learning process because they would think any

kind

of task would be solved by

phones

. Another reason is that

,

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There

were

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research about how

phones

could impact the capacity of someone's

memory

. Our

brain

has the job

to absorb

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stimuli every second. Stimuli are the triggers for

brain

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the brain

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to work. In

this

case,

phone

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phones

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are the biggest stimuli. As we know, there are many attractions that we could get from

phone

. Someone could switch between different

kind

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of platforms in a very short period of time. Those screening times lead to

increasing

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in the speed of our

brain

regulation but in a negative way. Our

brain

could not

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cope well enough because many

stimulis

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stimulus

stimuli

comes

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right away at the same time and do not have time to absorb them well.

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could

affects

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on

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someone's term of

memory

where it do not get the information well developed. Students

are require

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to have a good

memory

for memorizing the subjects that were given. If they cannot handle it well, they will

feel

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struggle in order to

following

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the curricula. In conclusion, despite mobile

phones

have

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the

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positive impact, they

also

give

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the

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downside impact

for

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students who currently studying at school. They will rely on

phones

in any

kind

of

situations

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situation

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and

has

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have

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a

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apply

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short term

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memory

.