The pie chart shows the main migration reasons to and from the United Kingdom in 2007.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the main migration reasons to and from the United Kingdom in 2007. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart provides information about the percentage of the UK’s
immigration
and
emigration
in 2007 based on its factors. From its numbers, it could be said that the major cause of two types of international resident movements is a definite job. Working permanently becomes the hugest reason both for
immigrants
and
immigrants
with almost a third of a thousand. Other
reasons
are finding a job and studying officially in
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educational institution, where a former factor is more stated by emigrants than
immigrants
, with
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in difference, and
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the latter factor is greater in
immigration
than
emigration
with a far gap
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per cent compared with four
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.
Moreover
, emigrants in the UK tend to hide their
reasons
. The numbers are double if compared with
immigrants
, eighteen
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and six
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. And for a company
as well as
other
reasons
, both of them are less than sixteen
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, proven by fifteen
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and eleven
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for
immigration
, and
also
thirteen
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and fourteen
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for
emigration
. In summary, a definite job had the greatest percentage both in
immigration
and
emigration
, and the other
reasons
are slightly diverse in percentage.
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