The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows how five different types of
tea
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are produced from
tea
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leaves.
Overall
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, every type of
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needs to undergo plucking and withering steps before the next
process
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. White
tea
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and green
tea
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are the only types that do not need to be fermented
while
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oolong
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tea
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needs a slight fermentation. Meanwhile, black
tea
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(both large and small leaves)
need
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needs
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a full fermentation. As shown in the chart, after being withered, white
tea
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only
have
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to be dried with the help of an oven. For green
tea
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, it needs to be steamed and rolled before being dried in an oven.
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, after the withering
process
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,
oolong
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tea
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does not have to be steamed,
instead
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, it directly goes into the rolling
process
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, and a slight fermentation step.
Large-leafleaf
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Large-leaf leaf
Large-leaflet
black
tea
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undergoes the same
process
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with
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as
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oolong
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tea
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, the difference is that it needs full fermentation
instead
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of slight fermentation. Small-leafleaf black
tea
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needs to be crushed after the withering step and undergoes a full fermentation
process
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. After the fermentation step is done,
oolong
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tea
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, large-leafleaf black
tea
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and small-leafleaf black
tea
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need to be dried with the help of an oven.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, process, oolong with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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