Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want to be teachers? How could this be changed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Education plays a crucial role in an individual's life as it is supportive of the development of children.Nowadays, it's inevitable that the

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lowest

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proportion of

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selecting

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a

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career

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ofteaching

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teaching

because of family pressure and time

consuming

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.

However

, I believe that

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issue will be sorted out if the government will help them from different perspectives. On the one hand, There are some reasons why, young people do not tend to enrol in the field of teaching.

Firstly

, they are chosen for their

career

by the family's pressure as the parents stress to them to become engineers or doctors in order to be

successful

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a successful

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person in life.

However

, they know that selecting a

career

is a freedom for

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.

Secondly

, some young ones have financial issues , which can be resolved only by earning wages in less term because in order to become

teacher

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a teacher

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, it takes more time as compared to other degrees.

For instance

, it takes 7 years to become a teacher after intermediate schooling ,

whereas

, other diplomas

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4

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years.

Due to

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, they want to get money as soon as possible

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and choose different fields.

Moreover

, As technology is evolving rapidly, most

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show their interest in information technology careers since they provide

high paying

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salaries to employees .

As a result

, they are influenced by the high amount

earnings

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of earnings

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.

On the other hand

, certain ways present by which , young people can choose careers in the course of teaching.One of the prime methods is that high authorities should support the students in terms of finances

as well as

competition. There are many families , who are facing the cost of

crisis

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the crisis

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and teachers receive the low package income which impacts not only them

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but the students as well.

Hence

, the regime should impose a law for private institutes to increase the

wage

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wages

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of teachers.

Moreover

, the lawmakers must increase the number of jobs for the government schools as it is quite competitive to land a job in these schools.

As a result

, youth do not show their interest in order to become teachers. In conclusion ,

although

there are a few reasons why,

juvenile

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juveniles

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are not choosing a

career

in the field of teaching since they are facing challenges in terms of finances.

However

,

this

dilemma can be sorted out if the supreme power will help them along all perspectives.