In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Fashion is an important component of culture and people’s

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. By modernization, communities have turned to more stylish clothes, in which

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fashion has a big proportion of trending.

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following the

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style.

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with, over the years, in the light of scorning cultural clothes as an old-fashioned style, traditional attire has seemed out of proportion.

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countries, by consuming more

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cinema

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industry, achieve

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attentions

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and

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of

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lifestyles.

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used to be popular after the famous casts have used

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in

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.

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reason, it would be no odd why these countries could be more effective.

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, these days they have done their best with

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to inspire requirements of

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and

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by influencers and celebrities to export their goods to the world.

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the necessities of preserving heritage, the traditional

dress

has many accessories and, in some cases, it is too heavy.

For instance

, medieval

dress

is so big and not comfortable and practical for modern women. It took time to

dress

up, and it is not compatible

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digital

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era, which is no more wasting time.

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,

community

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requires a simple and mundane

dress

as long as

elegant

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an elegant

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suit. The westerners have offered jeans and coats which have especially been selected by the youth.

Moreover

, the traditional styles are costlier than modern

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, because of

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sum of expensive accessories,

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they have to wear

such

as powdered wigs. In modern style,

such

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extra useless things do not exist. In summary, over the years,

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tend to have a simple and comfortable lifestyle, which didn’t exist in the past.

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, westerners could suggest an alternative one by wide advertising

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the world.

Not to mention

that the culture, which

dress

is a significant part of it, should be taken into account and preserved.