In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Fashion is an important component of culture and people’s
live
. By modernization, communities have turned to more stylish clothes, in which Replace the word
lives
western’s
fashion has a big proportion of trending. Change noun form
western
While
Linking Words
this
phenomenon has Linking Words
downside
, Add an article
a downside
however
, in my perspective, it has no problem Linking Words
on
following the Change preposition
apply
western’s
style.
Capitalize word
Western’s
To begin
with, over the years, in the light of scorning cultural clothes as an old-fashioned style, traditional attire has seemed out of proportion. Linking Words
Western’s
countries, by consuming more Change noun form
Western
fund
Fix the agreement mistake
funds
on
Change preposition
in
cinema
industry, achieve Add an article
the cinema
namouras
Change noun form
namouras'
namoura's
attentions
and Fix the agreement mistake
attention
implication
of Fix the agreement mistake
implications
human’s
lifestyles. Change noun form
human
For example
, smoking has been Linking Words
got
used to be popular after the famous casts have used Verb problem
apply
cigarette
in Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
movie
. Fix the agreement mistake
movies
For
Linking Words
this
reason, it would be no odd why these countries could be more effective. Linking Words
In addition
, these days they have done their best with Linking Words
social-media
to inspire requirements of Correct your spelling
social media
fad
and Fix the agreement mistake
fads
mood
by influencers and celebrities to export their goods to the world.
Fix the agreement mistake
moods
By regarding
the necessities of preserving heritage, the traditional Change preposition
Regarding
dress
has many accessories and, in some cases, it is too heavy. Use synonyms
For instance
, medieval Linking Words
dress
is so big and not comfortable and practical for modern women. It took time to Use synonyms
dress
up, and it is not compatible Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
with
digital
era, which is no more wasting time. Add an article
the digital
Thus
, Linking Words
community
requires a simple and mundane Add an article
the community
dress
as long as Use synonyms
elegant
suit. The westerners have offered jeans and coats which have especially been selected by the youth. Add an article
an elegant
the elegant
Moreover
, the traditional styles are costlier than modern Linking Words
one
, because of Correct pronoun usage
ones
lump
sum of expensive accessories, Add an article
a lump
the lump
which
they have to wear Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as powdered wigs. In modern style, Linking Words
such
Linking Words
an
extra useless things do not exist.
In summary, over the years, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
human
tend to have a simple and comfortable lifestyle, which didn’t exist in the past. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
Therefore
, westerners could suggest an alternative one by wide advertising Linking Words
through
the world. Change preposition
throughout
Not to mention
that the culture, which Linking Words
dress
is a significant part of it, should be taken into account and preserved.Use synonyms
Submitted by TUTOO on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Make sure your introduction clearly addresses the question and presents a clear stance on the topic. Provide a thesis statement that outlines the main points you will discuss.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of linking words to create coherence, and organize your ideas into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea, supported by examples or explanations.
task achievement
Expand on your examples, providing more details and clear explanations to support your main points. Specific examples should be relevant and contribute to the development of your argument.
task achievement
Work on providing a balanced discussion of both views if the question asks 'Is this a positive or negative development?'. You should discuss both sides to fully address the task.