Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are lots of

museums

imposing fees for

entry

tickets

,

while

others remain free.

This

essay thinks that imposing

entry

tickets

could be beneficial because the

museum

can keep

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high maintenance for their site, and

this

is important since it will highly attract comers and tourists.

However

, there are

also

drawbacks, one of them is that poor people or non-employed people

such

as students cannot afford to see the

museums

. When a

museum

has an

entrance

fee, it is believed that the fee will be allocated to keep the

museum

maintained. They could easily repair when something is broken, pay the tour guides, and provide many facilities

such

as free coffee and snacks for the visitors.

This

is very important because these services could attract newcomers, especially tourists from other countries and

therefore

, it can boost the country’s income.

For instance

, the Singapore National

Museum

has a relatively high tariff for their

entrance

tickets

, and they could provide the best services for their visitors,

such

as keeping the

museum

clean and hiring lots of tour guides.

On the other hand

, with the high price of the

entrance

ticket, people who have less money cannot afford to go to the

museum

.

This

is

due to

the fact that they still need to provide their basic needs, and

instead

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to the

museum

they prefer to buy food.

However

,

this

issue could be tackled with the government subsidizing the

tickets

or even providing free

entry

for those in need.

For example

, in Jakarta, there are lots of

museums

with cheap

entry

fee

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and special

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for students with the help of the government’s budget. In conclusion,

while

imposing

entrance

tariff

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for

museums

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has drawbacks, since it will limit the poor and students

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going there, it will bring many advantages to the

museum

because it will keep the

museum

well maintained and clean.

Therefore

,

this

essay agrees that the positive impacts outweigh the drawbacks because they can be mitigated in some ways.