The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in the United Kingdom in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the various
platform
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used for worldwide
news
content by citizens in the United Kingdom in 2019.
Overall
the people
interested
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in television
news
content more than the other
platforms
. the people who had searched
the
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international
newses
in
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the internet
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internet
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and who had not
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been intrested
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intrested
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interested
in the international
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have
same
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amount.the public who
heared
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heard
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the world
newses
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news
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by the way of third person speeches were too low when compared to remaining
news
platforms
.
Initially
in 2019 the television trends upward to 43% which was dramatically high when compared to other
news
platforms
. The people who had not interested in
news
content and who had searched international
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in
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different types of
internet
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were
same
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approximately 15%. In
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way
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the public in the United Kingdom who had used social media for
world wide
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worldwide
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newses
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news was
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around 14% which was 1% lower to not interested in global
news
and online searched peoples.
In
contrast
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the
remain
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platform
users were too low when compared to those previous
platforms
. The radio and
news papers
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platform
had
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declined to 8% and 4% respectively. The public who had listened
the
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international
newses
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news
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in
the
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word of mouth dramatically decreased
as a result
this
platform
tends to 1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words platform, news, platforms, newses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.

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