The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of stores that shut down and amount of outlets that were newly established in a nation between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
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,in 2011 more new establishments were unlatched compared to the store closing rate in that period, and
this
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trend fluctuated within the rest of the consecutive years to achieve a more stable closure of shops than their establishment in the year 2016 and onward till 2018. In detail, in 2011, approximately 8500 shops were opened,and
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, that figure dropped suddenly to 4000 in 2012.
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this
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, the new openings increased steadily until 2014, up to around 6100 shops .
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, again it decreased sharply to around 4000 outlets during the next consecutive year and that amount remained more or less constant from 2015 to 2017, and following that it again decreased gradually to achieve new opening of retailers to 3000 in the year 2018.
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