The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the differences
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areas
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in Universities in a year between 1990 and now. generally, there are changes any spots to relocate several places
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, car
park
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and other rooms added.
overall
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, there are was same fields but gradually shifting in some
areas
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. The views describe the changes in detail.
firstly
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left
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when it
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a
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area in the old
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is a basketball court now.
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, on the bottom left
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but now
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tennis fields. And some adding rooms on
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right
as well as
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changing room and fitness centre. More specifically,
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tennis has
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place which was right to left and
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wider.
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, it takes more capacity of
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. And
also
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, had expanded for change rooms in order to
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neat building. In
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of the
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areas
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more effective and
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for utilization of
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.
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no
shift
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for
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right sides as
outdoor
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an outdoor
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pool,
caffe
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cafe
and reception.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout alterations
  • Refurbished
  • Demolished
  • Erected
  • Renovated
  • Sports facilities
  • Tennis courts
  • Basketball courts
  • Football fields
  • Athletics track
  • Encroachment
  • Accessibility
  • Landscaping
  • Infrastructure
  • Spatial arrangement
  • Ample space
  • Congested
  • Upgrade
  • Downgrade
  • Amenity
  • Displacement
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