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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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 the differences
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in exercises
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exercises
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areas
 in Universities in a year between 1990 and now. generally, there are changes any spots to relocate several places
such
 as
park
, car
park
 and other rooms added.
overall
, there are was same fields but gradually shifting in some
areas
. The views describe the changes in detail.
firstly
, On
top
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 left
sides
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side
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 when it
is
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was
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 a
park
 area in the old
then
 is a basketball court now.
Secondly
, on the bottom left
sides
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side
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 was a car
park
 but now
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there is
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is
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are
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 tennis fields. And some adding rooms on
bottom
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 right
as well as
 changing room and fitness centre. More specifically,
for
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tennis has
change
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changed
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 place which was right to left and
becomes
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 wider.
Thus
, it takes more capacity of
peoples
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people
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. And
also
, had expanded for change rooms in order to
looks
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 neat building. In
term
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 of the
changes
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areas
was
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 more effective and
beneficially
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 for utilization of
areas
.
However
, there
are
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is
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 no
shift
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shifts
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 for
top
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the top
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 right sides as
outdoor
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an outdoor
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 pool,
caffe
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cafe
 and reception.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout alterations
  • Refurbished
  • Demolished
  • Erected
  • Renovated
  • Sports facilities
  • Tennis courts
  • Basketball courts
  • Football fields
  • Athletics track
  • Encroachment
  • Accessibility
  • Landscaping
  • Infrastructure
  • Spatial arrangement
  • Ample space
  • Congested
  • Upgrade
  • Downgrade
  • Amenity
  • Displacement
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