The graph shows the contribution of tourism, construction and agriculture to the Egyptian economy from 1982 to 2003.

The graph shows the contribution of tourism, construction and agriculture to the Egyptian economy from 1982 to 2003.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money contributed to the Egyptian economy by three sectors over 21 years.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the contribution of
tourism
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and
construction
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until the year 2000, followed by a decrease to the end of the
period
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,
while
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the contribution of agriculture remained stable throughout. The
tourism
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and
construction
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sectors followed a roughly similar trend. Both started at low points in 1982 at 0.2 and 1.1
billion
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dollars
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respectively. By 1995, both stood at 2.2
billion
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dollars
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. They reached a high point in 2000 with
tourism
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at 4.2 overtaking
construction
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at roughly 3.2
billion
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dollars
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. From 2000 to 2003 there was a decline in the contribution of both sectors. In 2001 and 2002
tourism
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stood at 3.2 but in the final year of the
period
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(
2003)
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2003),
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it fell significantly to 1.7
billion
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dollars
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.
Construction
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finished the
period
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contributing 2.5
billion
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dollars
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.
In contrast
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, income from the agriculture sector started and ended the
period
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at 1.5
billion
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dollars
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.
However
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, there were minor fluctuations.
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, in 2001 agriculture fell to 1.8
billion
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dollars
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but recovered by the following year.
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