In today’s world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantage of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

The

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technology

has been developing new devices that are becoming an integral part of our

life

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lives

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, and mobile

phone

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phones

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is

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one

of them. Nowadays, almost everybody has

such

device

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a device

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. I believe

,

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the pros of having a smartphone outweigh the cons.

To begin

with,

the

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communication has been improved since the invention of

mobile

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the mobile

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phone

. The whole world is connected with

this

technology

as with just

one

click, a person can call, text, and video

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to

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family

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a family

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member

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members

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or friends, who are living apart from them. It is

also

helpful to translate any foreign language for better understanding. For

an

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example, I came to Canada in 2021, and

smartphone

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my smartphone

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helped me to get rid of

homesickeness

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homesickness

by connecting with my family anytime I wanted and

learn

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the language.

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, it

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is

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has become a source of personal entertainment

becase

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because

it provides

the

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acess

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access

to games, music, and books at

one

's fingertips. With the help of the

internet

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one

can listen to music on the mobile

phone

anywhere, and

anytime

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of the day.

Therefore

, having a smartphone is beneficial in

this

era.

On the other hand

,

one

of the biggest

flawbacks

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drawbacks

of

this

technology

is potential negative impacts on

the

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comprehensive health. A lot of time is being spent on these devices, suffering the internet, which impacts the

eye sight

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eyesight

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.

Also

,

it's

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its

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blue light emissions are reducing

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sleeping time, which

effects

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the works

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works

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work

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of the brain.

For instance

,

according to

a survey, done by the WHO, the youth is growing less as compared to the past

as a result

of playing games on

the

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mobile phones

instead

of going outside.

Hence

, a

smart

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smartphone

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phone

is making people mentally and physically unhealthy. In conclusion, many people are buying mobile phones to make life easier.

Although

it provides you with numerous benefits,

it's

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drawbacks

on

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the

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health cannot be tolerated. The

technology

is good for human life

,

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if it is used in limits.