The graph shows the contribution of tourism in billions of dollars to the Egyptian economy from 1982 to 2003.

The graph shows the contribution of tourism in billions of dollars to the Egyptian economy from 1982 to 2003.
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The bar chart illustrates the income generated by
tourism
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in Egypt between 1982 and 2003.
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, it was a higher benefit
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of the term than at the beginning, with an increase in
contribution
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from 1982 to 2000 followed by a decline until 2003. In 1982, income from
tourism
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was at the lowest point of the period at roughly 0.3
billion
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dollars
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. Between 1982 and the year 2000, the
contribution
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of
tourism
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in Egypt rose significantly. In 1993, it increased by 1.5
billion
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dollars
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to approximately 1.8
billion
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dollars
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. Two years later, the figure stood at 2.2
billion
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, and in a
further
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two years, it was just below 2
billion
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dollars
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. Income from
tourism
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reached a peak in 2000 at around 4
billion
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dollars
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. In 2001 the
contribution
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of
tourism
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dropped slightly to 3.8
billion
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dollars
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and it remained stable at
this
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level in the following year. In 2003 there was a significant drop in the
contribution
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of
tourism
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, it fell from 3.8
billion
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dollars
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, compared with the same level in 1993, at roughly 1.8
billion
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dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourism, contribution, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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