Some people think that environmental problem should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally, Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Enviromental
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Environmental
issues are
growthing
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growing
in most
part
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parts
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of the world nowadays. Some argue that the problems will be
solving
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with
a
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an
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international deal,
while
others think that everybody would be finished
matter
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with matter
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of
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
in their
countries
than
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rather than
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approach a global process. In my opinion, the issue
enviromentally
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environmentally
environmental
is
disticing
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distancing
fast by international
incooraperate
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incorporate
rather than local process .
To begin
with, the natural range of the island affected
adverse
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from global
ındustry ın
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industry in
last
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the last
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years
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. In
the
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other words, when industry time commenced , the
enviroment
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environment
has
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changed unfriendly from production by using
energies
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energy
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such
as fuel.
Therefore
, the conservation of
internatimal
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international
protection
enviroment
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environment
environmental
agencies must start a global project
for decreasing
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to decrease
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worse
result
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results
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in nature.
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, in
2011
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the 2011
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international protection
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International Protection
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enviroment
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environment
meeting, the ANGA Korean government
recommende
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recommend
recommended
discovering
new
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a new
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generation
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car
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cars
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by
using
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use
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electric
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electricity
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in order to
fall
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reduce
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pollution
in
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apply
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weather.
On the other hand
, it is a better way
politicians
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focus
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to focus
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on their local
issue
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issues
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in
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
rather than looking at all
part
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parts
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of the
all
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apply
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earasides. In fact, developing
countries
have
most
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the most
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green views and clean weather recently.
This
is
source
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of addressing
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the apporiach
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apporiach
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approach
issue
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without expecting
international
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an international
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project. Another example
, President
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is, President
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of Eygpt had a
decition
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decision
feed
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to feed
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more trees in
middle
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the middle
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of Cairo in 2017 and
countinued unti
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continued until
2022.
As a result
, the city has changed more relief and
freindly
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friendly
in
enviroment
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environment
side. Personally, the global agreement best method to solve
enviromential
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environmental
problem
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problems
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.
Todays
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Today
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,
majority
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the majority
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of
countries
influnce
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influence
influenced
each other very fast,
thank
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thanks
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to developing business among them.
Thus
, if they
action
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act
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together to backwards of nature by a correct solving road, they would get
a
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the
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best positive consequent in large
erea
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area
.
For instance
, China started a
conveinue
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continue
convenience
project with some Asian
countries
and they achieved
successful
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successfully
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to be saving
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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of
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
likely
chronick
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chronic
disease. In conclusion, there is no doubt that the local deal has
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create
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created
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a
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relaxed
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relax
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relaxed
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enviroment
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environment
in one
part
of the world.
However
, from my point, the movement with international conservation
associate
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associates
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more suitable for solving in big
part
of the
enviroment
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environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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