Some people think that environmental problem should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally, Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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in most Correct your spelling
growing
part
of the world nowadays. Some argue that the problems will be Fix the agreement mistake
parts
solving
with Change the form of the verb
solved
a
international deal, Change the article
an
while
others think that everybody would be finished matter
of Change preposition
with matter
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the enviroment
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in their Correct your spelling
environment
countries
than
approach a global process. In my opinion, the issue Rephrase
rather than
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environmentally
environmental
disticing
fast by international Correct your spelling
distancing
incooraperate
rather than local process .
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incorporate
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with, the natural range of the island affected adverse
from global Change the adjective
adversely
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industry in
last
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the last
years
. In Correct quantifier usage
few years
the
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apply
enviroment
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environment
has
changed unfriendly from production by using Unnecessary verb
apply
energies
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energy
such
as fuel. Therefore
, the conservation of internatimal
protection Correct your spelling
international
enviroment
agencies must start a global project Correct your spelling
environment
environmental
for decreasing
worse Change preposition
to decrease
result
in nature. Fix the agreement mistake
results
For example
, in 2011
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the 2011
international protection
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International Protection
enviroment
meeting, the ANGA Korean government Correct your spelling
environment
recommende
discovering Correct your spelling
recommend
recommended
new
generation Correct article usage
a new
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of car
car
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cars
using
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use
electric
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electricity
fall
pollution Verb problem
reduce
in
weather.
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apply
On the other hand
, it is a better way politicians
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for politicians
focus
on their local Fix the infinitive
to focus
issue
in Fix the agreement mistake
issues
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the enviroment
enviroment
rather than looking at all Correct your spelling
environment
part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
all
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apply
countries
have most
green views and clean weather recently. Correct article usage
the most
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is source
of addressing Add an article
the source
a source
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the apporiach
apporiach
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approach
issue
without expecting Fix the agreement mistake
issues
international
project. Another exampleCorrect article usage
an international
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of Eygpt had a Add a missing verb
is, President
decition
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decision
feed
more trees in Fix the infinitive
to feed
middle
of Cairo in 2017 and Add an article
the middle
countinued unti
2022. Correct your spelling
continued until
As a result
, the city has changed more relief and freindly
in Correct your spelling
friendly
enviroment
side.
Personally, the global agreement best method to solve Correct your spelling
environment
enviromential
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environmental
problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Todays
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Today
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
countries
influnce
each other very fast, Correct your spelling
influence
influenced
thank
to developing business among them. Correct subject-verb agreement
thanks
Thus
, if they action
together to backwards of nature by a correct solving road, they would get Replace the word
act
a
best positive consequent in large Correct article usage
the
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. Correct your spelling
area
For instance
, China started a conveinue
project with some Asian Correct your spelling
continue
convenience
countries
and they achieved successful
to be saving Change the adjective
successfully
disadvantages
of Correct article usage
the disadvantages
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the enviroment
enviroment
likely Correct your spelling
environment
chronick
disease.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that the local deal has Correct your spelling
chronic
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created
create
a Wrong verb form
created
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relaxed
relax
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relaxed
enviroment
in one Correct your spelling
environment
part
of the world. However
, from my point, the movement with international conservation associate
more suitable for solving in big Fix the agreement mistake
associates
part
of the enviroment
.Correct your spelling
environment
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