The charts below show the qualifications of staff in an advertising company in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the qualifications of staff in an advertising company in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts
compares
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compare
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the percentage of employees with various qualifications in an advertising company over the years from 1990 to 2010
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportion of workers in Social science and arts was the highest figure in both periods of time,
while
Other
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the Other
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shows the lowest one. The primary change in these years was the increase in the staff with nursing and Engineering degrees. In 1990 Social science and arts constituted 20% and
illustrate
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negligible
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a negligible
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increase
by
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of
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1% in 2010.
While
Nursing showed the same trend and increased from 7% to 11%
at the end
of the period.
Therefore
, at the beginning Administration and Education
was
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were
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19% and 15% respectively, before dropping by 4 and 2 percent in 2010. Regarding workers in Engineering increased significantly from 9% to 19% over the periods. In 1990 Humanities and Other degrees
was
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were
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4% and 2%,
then
both of them increased by 1%
at the end
of the period to precise at 5 and 3 presents respectively. MBA dropped by half from 6% to 3%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Qualifications
  • Advertising company
  • Staff composition
  • High school diploma
  • Bachelor's degree
  • Postgraduate degree
  • Proportion
  • Percentage
  • Trend
  • Decade
  • Workforce
  • Educational qualifications
  • Shift in qualifications
  • Implications
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