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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart below illustrates how residual products negatively affect with Republic of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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 and the United Kingdom.
Overall
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, in
Sweden
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 only 3 kinds of waste: recycling, underground and
destroying
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waste by fire.
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 the Republic of
Korea
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 has these types. The United Kingdom has added Chemical treatments and dumping at sea. The most used method in the UK is underground, it takes 82%. If
this
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 indicator compares with
Korea
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, it is approximately more
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times. Incineration is the lowest percentage ( 2% ),
while
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 in
Sweden
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 it is one-fifth of all percentages.
Republic
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The Republic
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 of
Korea
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 is saved from residual products, because recycling is the most common way from it ( 69% ),
whereas
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Sweden
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 has only 25 % and the UK has not recycled at all. They don’t use chemical treatment and dimpling at sea, so it cleaner country than Europe’s kingdom.
Sweden
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 uses underground techniques to cope with waste ( 55%) ,
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, in East Asian states, it`s only 22%, which is better for ecology.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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