The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The line graph provides information about the demand
of
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for
fiber
types Change the spelling
fibre
form
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from
the
people around the world over the period from 1980 to 2015. Correct article usage
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Overall
it is clear that
the
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cotton
and polyester were the most popular types of all
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textile
over the 8 years. Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
Whereas
the cellulosic and the wool were the least of all four types.
To start, the
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cotton
stood at 12
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a 12
million
tons
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the
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around
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at around
million
tons
. After
this
, the cotton
slightly increased to 25 million
tons
and then
it a little bit diped
in 2000, and grew again to 32 Correct your spelling
dipped
duped
dip
million
tons
in 2015. However
, the
polyester began with Correct article usage
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lower
point of demand from Correct article usage
a lower
the
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cotton
, it experienced a drastically
rise over the 8 years and stood at almost 70 Change the word
drastic
million
tons
in the final year.
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cellulosic and Correct article usage
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the the
wool were the least in the time period, they started nearly 1 or 2 Correct article usage
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million
. In 2000, where the cellulosic gradually dropped to nearly 0 ton
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tons
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this
, it considerably grew to 10 million
tons
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tons
then
it remained unchanged untill
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