the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
The line graph draws the conclusion
of
a survey about the value of three types of metals, like copper, nickel and zinc Change preposition
from
how
varied in the months of 2014. Correct word choice
which
Overall
, the graph provides information on nickel’s trend was a significant decline.
The nickel’s
line shows that Change noun form
nickel
was
the most cost change between all of Correct pronoun usage
there was
metals
in the first month. Add an article
the metals
However
, from February to June, it seems to decrease sharply to -3% . Before it remained stable in next
three months, there had risen Correct article usage
the next
on
June. Change preposition
in
At the end
of 2014, it appears to reach
a plateau after some fluctuation. The copper had a slight fall that year.In the first half of the years, its tendency happened to dip gently. Wrong verb form
have reached
Nevertheless
, in the last
half
it Add a comma
half,
growth
gradually.
In spite of these two,the zinc's pattern had a Replace the word
grew
stead
surge slope, Correct your spelling
steady
although
the line fluctuated considerably. It reached a peak to
3% in Change preposition
of
second
month Change the article
the second
whereas
it Was falling
suddenly in Wrong verb form
Fell
ninth
Correct article usage
the ninth
of
Change preposition
apply
months
until October. After Fix the agreement mistake
month
that
it Add a comma
that,
is
skyrocketed to 2%.Unnecessary verb
apply
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