The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles.
The provided diagram
illustrate
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the recycling
process
of used
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, it is ahendi
process
which includes about 7 to 8 steps. Compressor,
chrusher
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crusher
,heater and so on are important and heavy
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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which are used in
this
process
. Looking at the
process
in detail, the recycling
process
begins with throwing
plastic
bottles
into
dustbin
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a dustbin
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after use.
Then
with the help of used rock the garbage from old is been are taken to
recycling
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the recycling
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centre. Here, the garbage is checked well and
plastic
bottles
are separated. The fourth step is compressing
bottles
into blocks.
Further
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the compressed blocks are sent for crushing.
The next step is
converting the blocks into tiny particles with
help
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the help
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of
crusher
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a crusher
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and
allow
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allowing
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that particles into water for washing
purpose
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. Once, the small parts are worst they
are send
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for producing
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plastic
pellets.
The following step is
hitting. Here, the
plastic
Pellets
a
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are a
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Rahi for producing raw materials. At least the raw materials are ready to produce
recycle
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recycled
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products like box
bottles
bag
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bags
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pen
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pens
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and other stuff.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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