The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles.
The provided diagram
illustrate
the recycling Change the verb form
illustrates
process
of used plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, it is ahendi process
which includes about 7 to 8 steps. Compressor,chrusher
,heater and so on are important and heavy Correct your spelling
crusher
equipments
which are used in Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
this
process
.
Looking at the process
in detail, the recycling process
begins with throwing plastic
bottles
into dustbin
after use. Correct article usage
a dustbin
Then
with the help of used rock the garbage from old is been are taken to recycling
centre. Here, the garbage is checked well and Add an article
the recycling
a recycling
plastic
bottles
are separated. The fourth step is compressing bottles
into blocks. Further
the compressed blocks are sent for crushing.
Add a comma
Further,
The next step is
converting the blocks into tiny particles with help
of Correct article usage
the help
crusher
and Correct article usage
a crusher
allow
that particles into water for washing Wrong verb form
allowing
purpose
. Once, the small parts are worst they Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
are send
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are sent
for producing
Change preposition
to produce
plastic
pellets. The following step is
hitting. Here, the plastic
Pellets a
Rahi for producing raw materials. At least the raw materials are ready to produce Add a missing verb
are a
recycle
products like box Wrong verb form
recycled
bottles
bag
Fix the agreement mistake
bags
pen
and other stuff.Fix the agreement mistake
pens
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