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The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.
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The bar chart gives information about the five communities which gave some of
money
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the money
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 to developing nations from 2008 to 2011.
Overall
, the dominant sponsor among them is organisation 2, the first and third
company
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companies
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 fluctuated,
meanwhile
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 the
forth
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fourth
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 and five
business
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businesses
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 experienced
the
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a
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 downward trend.
It is clear that
business
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 2 has the fastest growth during the
periods
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period
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, 2008 to 2011. They started funding 1.3
billion
 dollars and reached the highest peak at 2.6
at the end
 of the period. The first and third
company
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companies
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 fluctuated .
Company
 1 started funding 0.6
billion
 dollars, it increased
almost
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 1
billion
 before dropped and stayed at 0.7
billion
. The same happened with
company
 3, which started funding 1.5
billion
 and fluctuated during those 5 years.
Meanwhile
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company
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companies
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 4 and 5
has
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downside
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a downside
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 trend
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words company, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international aid
  • developing countries
  • economic assistance
  • fluctuations
  • trend analysis
  • philanthropic organizations
  • non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
  • foreign aid
  • donor countries
  • recipient nations
  • financial contributions
  • economic conditions
  • fiscal policies
  • sustainable development
  • humanitarian aid
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
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