The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to suprise birthday party for him. Write a letter to chris’s parents. In your lattter - Say why you think chris will enjoy the surprise party - Explain why you won’t be able to attent the party - Give details of a plan to see Chris at different time.
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Dear Collins,
I am writing for Chris’s surprise birthday
party
. I read to
your invitation card. First of all, Change preposition
apply
i
want to say thank you Change the capitalization
I
beacuse
you Correct your spelling
because
invinted
to me even if Correct your spelling
invented
invited
i
am so far. I hope Change the capitalization
I
chris
will be extremely happy becauseChange the capitalization
Chris
,
we know he is a Remove the comma
apply
realy emational
guy.
Correct your spelling
really emotional
In addition
, i
can’t join the Change the capitalization
I
party
so ı feel realy
bad Correct your spelling
really
however
i
have Change the capitalization
I
a good reasons
. Correct the article-noun agreement
a good reason
good reasons
Firstly
, i
looked plane ticket but ı Change the capitalization
I
can’t
find Wrong verb form
couldn’t
some
. I found 1 Correct determiner usage
any
days
before the Change to a singular noun
day
party
but this
ticket expensive
Add a missing verb
was expensive
on the other hand
my home to
Australia Change preposition
in
Add a missing verb
is realy
realy
far. The flight takes 20 hours. Maybe Correct your spelling
really
i
will come next birthday if we plan early.
Actually, we have a plan with Chris. He Change the capitalization
I
want
to Change the verb form
wants
come
my hometown. Add the preposition
come to
He
really interested Add a verb
He is
He was
to
my daily life, my culture, Change preposition
in
my
friends. He said that ‘Correct word choice
and my
i
will come next month’ Capitalize word
I
however
we didin’t
talk about Correct your spelling
didn’t
this
plan. I need to write to him.
To sum up
, enjoy the party
and say hi for
me. I will send some Change preposition
to
gift
for Fix the agreement mistake
gifts
party
.
With Love,
Kağan.Add an article
the party
a party
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task achievement
For task achievement, try to develop your reasons for not attending the party more fully, providing richer explanations that are relevant to the situation.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is informal, which suits the context of writing to a friend's parents. However, you could enhance the friendliness of the letter by including more polite expressions and showing more enthusiasm for the party initiative.
coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, make sure your paragraphs are well-organized and each focuses on a single idea. The transitions between paragraphs need to be smoother to guide the reader through your points more naturally.
coherence cohesion
Double check your work for grammatical errors, and try to use a wider range of sentence structures and vocabulary to make your letter more impressive.
coherence cohesion
Start with a proper greeting, such as 'Dear Mr. and Mrs. Collins,' and end with an appropriate closing, like 'Best regards,' to adhere to the conventions of letter writing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,