The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.
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The pie charts provide information about the
forests
and
timber
on five different continents worldwide.
Overall
, we can see that the highest quantity of wood was in North America and Asia had the lowest
rate
,
while
the highest proportion of
forest
was in North America.
Moreover
, Europe has the lowest number of
forests
. It can deduced from these pie charts that the highest
rate
of
timber
is almost 30 per cent in North America,
however
the minimum proportion was in Asia around 9 per cent of
timber
.
Furthermore
, Asia has the highest percentage of
forest
,
while
it has the lowest number of wood.
For example
, the
rate
was nearly 9% for
timber
. If we compare the
forests
and timbers in Africa we notice that the
rate
of the
forest
was almost 16%,
while
the timbers were 9% in the continent. It is interesting to notice that the European
forest
had 27% all around,
while
the
rate
of
timber
was approximately 18 per cent. In conclusion,
although
Aisa had the highest number of
forests
. but the
timber
was the least.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words forests, timber, rate, forest with synonyms.
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