The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The three pie charts illustrate the
consumption
of 4 types of food
used in the world specifically in China
and India
in 2008. As it
can be seen, the figures are compared to the amounts of Correct pronoun usage
apply
food
used in china
and Capitalize word
China
India
in the same year.
As an overall
trend, the two countries showed different food
consumption
from the world average, while
processed food
consumption
still had the largest percentages in all the three charts. In particular
, processed food
consumption
was the highest in the in the
world, accounting for 41%, which was followed by vegetables and fruits at 29% and animal Remove the redundancy
apply
food
at a quarter. Only 4% consisted of nut and seeds
consumption
.
Likewise
, China
used processed food
in the largest proportion of 39%. Animal food
showed the same figure as the world’s average, 25%. Vegetable and fruits was
used at 23% Change the verb form
were
while
nuts and seeds
showed less than a half figure. In India
, both vegetable and processed food
were used the most in the year 2008 with percentages of 34% and 32% respectively, nuts and seeds
used in this
country showed the largest proportion among the three charts given, making up 19% at this
time.
In conclusion, processed food
was the highest proportion used in both China
and India
whereas
nuts and seeds
were the lowest.Submitted by kazza735 on
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