The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs depict the activities done by graduate and postgraduate students from the United Kingdom, after finishing college, except for full-time
work
, in 2008. Overall
, most of them did further
study or part-time work
. The less frequent activity of these students was voluntary work
.
Among graduates, the majority continued their education, while
the second largest group got part-time jobs, followed by unemployment, and the last
group did voluntary work
. Analysing the extremes, about 29.000 people decided to continue learning and only 3.500 students decided to do work
without salary.
Concerning postgraduates, most of them did further
studies, whereas
the second larger cluster worked in partial time, next to unemployment, and the minority group preferred to do social work
. Looking at the extremes, around 2.750 people decided to do academic work
and only 345 people decided to work
for the community.
To summarize, both categories (graduate and postgraduate) presented the same behaviour, after leaving a bachelor's degree or postgraduate, in the year 2008.Submitted by fmulato on
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