The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs depict the activities done by graduate and postgraduate students from the United Kingdom, after finishing college, except for full-time
work
, in 2008. Use synonyms
Overall
, most of them did Linking Words
further
study or part-time Linking Words
work
. The less frequent activity of these students was voluntary Use synonyms
work
.
Among graduates, the majority continued their education, Use synonyms
while
the second largest group got part-time jobs, followed by unemployment, and the Linking Words
last
group did voluntary Linking Words
work
. Analysing the extremes, about 29.000 people decided to continue learning and only 3.500 students decided to do Use synonyms
work
without salary.
Concerning postgraduates, most of them did Use synonyms
further
studies, Linking Words
whereas
the second larger cluster worked in partial time, next to unemployment, and the minority group preferred to do social Linking Words
work
. Looking at the extremes, around 2.750 people decided to do academic Use synonyms
work
and only 345 people decided to Use synonyms
work
for the community.
To summarize, both categories (graduate and postgraduate) presented the same behaviour, after leaving a bachelor's degree or postgraduate, in the year 2008.Use synonyms
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