the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates how much carbon dioxide emission was produced per person (in metric
tonnes
) between 1967 and 2007 in the United Kingdom, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal.
Overall
, it is readily apparent the British emitted the highest volume of CO2 through a given period
.Furthermore
, even in the first period
Portugal the least emitted. In the end, the country closed the gap with Sweden
which had the second position early. In the first period
, Italy was in third place. However
, Italy managed to outrace Sweden
from third to second place.
Firstly
, British approximately 11 tonnes
However
, around 1987 to 2007 British experienced a slight decrease to 9 tonnes
.Sweden
was in second place from 1967 to 1977. Moreover
, Sweden
increased by 3 tonnes
, suddenly Sweden
declined sharply to 7 and finally
5 tonnes
in 2007.In addition
, Portugal had the lowest number of tonnes
at the beginning of the period
, approximately only 1,8 tonnes
. In spite of that, Portugal started to rise smoothly and reached a peak at 4 tonnes
in 2017.Italy was levelled off with Portugal, which had 7 tonnes
in 2017.Submitted by hai
on
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