The chart belows shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years

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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of destinations of Anthropology students who graduated from a single university,

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a table compares the salaries of these graduates in five years of being employed.

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, working full-time was the most popular occupation compared to the other five ones. Even though the highest income was earned by those who worked in

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government sector, the same sector had

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the lowest value.

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, full-time employment had the largest proportion, at 52%, followed by those who did

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part-time work and were unemployed, at 15% and 12%, respectively.

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, only 5% of graduates combine part-time work and postgraduate study, accounting for the lowest number in the chart. The same subordinate percentage was for those individuals who participated in full-time postgraduate study and unknown graduates. Looking at the salaries data, employees who worked for the government can have a paycheck of just from 25.000 to 49.000 per year(5%), progressing to more than 100.000 (50%).

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, only 5% of occupants have an annual wage of 25.000 and more as freelance

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, increasing to 40%, at 75.000$ and higher.

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The chart belows shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years

University students are increasingly studying aboard as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying aboard outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that Professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish discuss both these weeds and give your own opinion

Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree

‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.